Animation+Scenes

Your script outlines were very similar, so here are a series fo scenes compiled from all of them together. Take a look and make changes where you think necessary (add, combine, break up scenes), and correct me if I'm wrong. Also, think about where you could work in all of your potential ideas along the way before you arrived at the E-pan. Those were:


 * Radiation(at plant)
 * Radiation(in shipping)
 * Temp sensors (electronic)/better e-coli detectors
 * Something (like a cleansing substance) in the meat
 * Scanning at the plant
 * Heated knife (butchering)
 * Cooking meat (put it in a sealed vacuum bag)

Takes place in the scientist's (Kirk) living room. Turns on the tv to watch the news but a Barbie show was on. Then growls "Not that." He changes the channel, and sees Ros Rogers (the girl was the reporter) reporting the news that his friend Tom has died of e-coli. He says "I wish I could do something about that." His wife, Rosalie, says as comes in"Maybe you should." she suggests. Kirk nods his head
 * Scene 1**

Takes place at the lab. Kirk goes to his lab. A bunch of inventors where working on their projects. Kirk announces that "Hey guys, we're going to work on something to kill e-coli."the inventors say "What's e-cola?" Kirk says "You smarticles, e-col//i// is a bacteria that gets into food like hamburger and can make people sick and even kill them. You really should learn more about it because we need to help." The inventors start making suggestions like the ones above. Kirk cuts them off and says "Guys we really need to go do some research." Off they go to the farm to learn about the farm to fork process.
 * Scene 2**

Takes place at the farm. Farmer's name is Mr. Max Well. The farmer explains the farm to fork process. After the farmer explains the process, he says "Your research sounds interesting. Mind if I join you? I know a guy at Kroger, plus I have to pick up some milk." Kirk says "Don't you have a cow?" Mr. Max Well says yes I do have some cows, but I rise them to get slaughtered. Cow contributes Mooooo (translated with one of Kirk's inventions) “Eat more chicken!"(Chicken squack) ."Kirk you bought your translater"? says one of the invetors. "You just don't know when you need it"says Kirk.
 * Scene 3**

Takes place at Kroger. The scientists ask questions about what might help eliminate the e-coli threat. Kirk says "What's this I hear about FAT... STEVE?" Kroger guy says "My name is Steve. That's a little offensive. You mean FAT TOM?" Kirk starts tearing up. Kirk asks if the Kroger guy has any ideas. Kroger guy suggests "Maybe a better temperature sensor or e-coli detector. Or even a heated knife for cutting deli meat." Kroger people are interested as well, but they need more information still.
 * Scene 4**

Takes place at the OSU lab. They ask about FATTOM. Again, Kirk gets emotional (that was his friend's name but just the Tom part). The OSU scientists explain "FATTOM is FoodAcidityTemperatureTimeOxygenMoisture" (very fast). Kirk says "Excuse me? Can you please slow down?" OSU scientist repeats it slower, and explains "Those are the conditions that contribute to e-coli growth. The bacteria doubles every 20 minutes." One of Kirk's scientists says, "That's a really big family!" The scientists ask what the OSU researchers would suggest. They suggest packing the meat in an air-tight bag that doesn't provide oxygen.
 * Scene 5**

Takes place back at Kirk's lab. Eureka!! While thinking about what they've learned and their previous ideas, Kirk (and friends) come up with the idea for the E-pan. They build a prototype and think about how to spread the word.(Kirk gets a bread)
 * Scene 6**

They ask a tv station to advertise their E-pan and they do. Kirk's family uses E-pan and it works.
 * Scene 7**